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Fallen Seraph

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« on: December 30, 2004, 10:20:15 pm »
Hi, I am sure a bunch of you have a quite imaginative and good creative side. So show off your work here. Be it poetry, short stories, lyrics, drawings, the works.

Here is one poem, I had to write for english class, it had to be 27 lines and picked from a slection of headlines. I choose Possessed! By his Own Tattoo, in my case a Succubi tattoo:

Demon!!!
All I have ever touched all I ever knew is dead.
Demon!!! You did this,
You demon, you damn fiend grafted to my skin and mind.
Like lambs to the slaughter you lead them.
I watched like a distant figure,
As my hands tore at their soft skin.
A seductress of the mind,
You led me unabashed.
Your words of heresy,
A venom of my mind and body.
My life before was empty,
But now it is full.
Full of sorrow, full of rage, full of hatred.
I feel your hands hold me,
They are not ones to save me,
They drag me deeper in.
Your image on my mind, and body,
Those hollow eyes reflect my own.
You led me here laughing,
You love my hatred, my desire.
I won’t be tormented, I won’t sell my soul!
You see them lying there, you see the room.
A drenched room, viscous with hell’s torment.
I feel myself drowning,
I have drowned in their blood.
You will drown in mine!

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« Reply #1 on: December 31, 2004, 04:29:34 pm »
Hi Falen Seraph!

I don't know a lot about poetry in english... but I think that your poem is great!

I posted a short story of mine in restricted area... but I see no reason to keep it oly there. So, I'll attach it here, too. It was written in catalan, and translated for me to english. So, please, forgive the terrible grammar -_-
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« Reply #2 on: December 31, 2004, 06:43:31 pm »
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Hi Falen Seraph!

I don't know a lot about poetry in english... but I think that your poem is great!

I posted a short story of mine in restricted area... but I see no reason to keep it oly there. So, I'll attach it here, too. It was written in catalan, and translated for me to english. So, please, forgive the terrible grammar -_-
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Nice story, Luthien, and the grammar is not that bad. Thanks for your comment on my poem. :D

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« Reply #3 on: January 02, 2005, 02:43:16 pm »
I am half creative person if that means anything. I was writing some poems with my friend 2 years ago. Songs were funny. It wasn't serious. I still have them but it wouldn't make sense if I would translate it on english.
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« Reply #4 on: January 02, 2005, 02:49:16 pm »
I have some pictures that I was making in paint.  :D

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« Reply #5 on: January 04, 2005, 10:32:21 pm »
Here is just a drawing I made for one of my characters, in one of my various stories. Her name is Eve: http://img150.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img150&image=eve4xp.jpg